3=Simond
"What's happening?" "where are we?" "oh finally you have woken up" said Jack. " You fainted again, we were on a plane and i think we were shot down". "What! I dont remember a thing". Ok well just get on your uniform we are going to say our matins and than go see if anyone is on this island". We said our prayer and we walked through the forest and out onto a beach. One of the other four boy's i was with said i looked pallor from fainting. "we walked for a while and than suddenly we heard a loud low pitch sound and we followed it till we saw a group of boys on the border of the beach. I was relieved to see someone else on the island.
When we got over to the boy's we started talking. "I woke up" had I passed out again? I get up and next thing i know i was voted in to go look for food or something. I had no clue what was going on and i couldn't remember past seeing those boy's on the beach. Now some fat kid with glasses is arguing with another kid with a weird shell in his hand. The fight quickly ended and a boy named Ralph, Jack, and I went into the forest. We were to search the land to find out if it is an island or not. On the way back we found a piglet trapped in some creepers and rite as Jack was going to kill it the piglet ran away. I think he is scared but i would never say that out loud. At least we found some other living organism.
2 comments:
You did a good job on the blog. It really seemed like you were Simon, because of the way you would write it. you didn't write Simon said ..., but instead you wrote in the dialogue. I like how in the journal entry you made it seem so realistic. Like when Simon fainted you didn't put in the parts before he fainted. Because when you faint you normally don't remember things that happened right before you fainted.
dude again your just like simon you describe him well and have good storyline on him
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