chapter six: beast from water or air?
Uhh what happened? "Hurry Simon the beastie attacked us" said Samneric. I wake up and the twins are awakening a couple more people to warn them a beastie has come from the sky in a parachute. Everyone in the huts in front of me were awake and yawning and stretching there arms. Some people were just getting out of there huts and others were getting spears to hunt the beastie. It turned out that Samneric fell asleep on the job and woke up with the beastie close to them or something but they than ran down and told Ralph.
Ralph decided that they were going to hunt the beastie because i think he was slightly frightened himself. The hunters had spears but I didn't. The hunters started walking with there spears and everyone else followed because we were scared. We left Piggy and the littluns back at the huts. We were on a whole different side of the island that no one had bin to before. We came up some weirdly assorted rocks that formed almost a bridge to a castle like thing. We start climbing and Jack spotted a hideout which he thought was cool. Maybe that's where the beastie lives but it wasn't there at the moment. I think that the beastie is some human being a sick and vile creature who wasn't friends with anybody before the crash. I am trying to think about the plane we were on before we crash landed.
chapter seven:No order
Ralph seems like he is not doing so well. What could i say to cheer him up? This might be hard but I will do my best to make him happy. I told hi m that he will make it back. He seemed reassured because of what he said. He looked confuse though for a second. I think he was confused because i told him HE would make it back not WE. I like this island and I feel in peace here. I want to stay but as many pro's there are about the island there is more cons. I thought to myself about this for a while. Jack wants to hunt. I don't hunt but i just track them. All of a sudden someone sees a bore and everyone goes after it throwing there spears and all. The situation becomes wild and out of control. Now everyone is on the beach. Ralph is celebrating because he hit the bore with the spear. Even though he did not kill it he was cheerful. I felt him falling away. Thats how Jack got to be how he is now. Thinking of Jack where is he? Than a rumble comes from a bush and out pops Jack. Everyone looked at him and he showed off his hand. I looked closely and realized there was a bloody wound on his hand. He started telling a story. Oh not again. He kind of tried to drag the attention from Ralph to himself. He said that he tried to catch it while it was wounded and he almost got it but the tusk cut his skin open.
After the hunters participate in a wild game where a boy is in the middle and he is the pig and everyone pretends to kill him. I felt that each time they played that stupid game they had less order.
Shortly after the game Ralph decides to wait till morning but Jack challenges Ralph and everyone else to go. Ralph, Jack and Roger went up while we stayed down. There was little argument but they were getting along. This isn't good. The three boy's see something and run down because they are afraid. They came down and said it was a flappy ape shaped figure.
2 comments:
I like how you made it as if it really were Simon talking. Because hes very nice, and doesn't have an attitude or think he should be leader. Everything he says and thinks is just calm and mellow.
dude you did a really good job of getting in simons like attitude you fooled me haha good job maxy
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